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Friday, September 21, 2012

The Finishing Project--Day 4

The first of two poems regarding the cat; one a haiku, the other lifted straight from this post and made to rhyme. "The goal being simply to produce finished work" . . . 

The kitten crying
Uncanny like a baby
Distracts us in bed

3 comments:

  1. Ha--thanks. I'm pleased with it, since it does what haiku is supposed to and distills the incredibly weird kitten-as-child feeling down to three short, exact lines.

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  2. Haiku! Love it. It's so precise.

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